Structual Analysis
Thesis Statement
In the opening paragraph [Sec. #1], the last sentence as highlighted in the following quotes would be the thesis statement of the article. This is the thesis statement because it summarizes the main idea of the passage, which is about the use of technology and computer modeling to modernize prescribed burns in order to make them safer, more effective, and less disruptive.
With climate change parching the land and increasing wildfire hazards,
scientists are beginning to use cutting-edge technology and computer modeling to make controlled,
low-intensity burns safer, more effective and less disruptive to nearby communities.
Assay Outline
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[Sec. #2]
- Advanced techniques make a difference!
In this section, it is mentioned that scientists are using
advanced techniques
, including drones and various sensors, to collect data on prescribed burns in order to better understand how they can be madesafer
, moreeffective
, andless disruptive
. It is also mentioned that while researchers have previously used advanced techniques to study wildfire behavior, fewer have applied these techniques specifically to prescribed fires, such as determining the best methods for clearing debris before a burn.
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[Sec. #3]
- Fire preditction is getting harder
In this section, it is mentioned that prescribed burns can be made more effective by thinning the forest before the burn, but this can also make the burn harder to control. It is also mentioned that
global warming
has led to more extreme heat and dryness, which can turn wildfires intocatastrophes
. The Forest Service'smathematical models
for predicting how wildfires spread are not keeping up with the changes brought about by global warming, and the agency's investigation into a prescribed burn in New Mexico found that the resulting fire was more dangerous and fast moving than anticipated. To help land managers learn how to conduct prescribed burns in changing conditions, Mr.Hiers, a fire scientist, has developed a video-game-like training system.
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[Sec. #4]
- Some methods for collecting data
They are collecting data by mapping the terrain with lidar, using a thermal camera to measure temperature, and using a multi-spectral camera to measure the dryness of the brush. The scientists are also burning small piles of wood and collecting smoke samples to study how embers travel and how fires spread out of control, as well as analyzing the chemical composition of emissions. These methods could potentially be used to
evaluate the effectiveness of prescribed burns
.
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[Sec. #5]
- An art-like burn
In this paragraph, it is described that the researchers at the Forest Research Station are conducting a prescribed burn in order to maintain the health of the forest. The burn is led by the burn boss, Dr. York, who uses a torch to start the fire and leads a small crew in walking through the forest and setting lines of flame. As the day progresses, the fire grows in intensity and begins to spread rapidly, burning over 13 acres of land. The scientists observe the fire and gather data using various technologies, including drones. The burn is described as both a
natural
andunnatural
way of safeguarding the land, and is compared to an art.
Coherence & Cohesion
[Sec. #2]
Coherence
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Para #1 - Section #2 is the first paragraph that follows the opening paragraph,
so its first paragraph naturally carries on to elaborate on the main topic.
In the first sentence
Scientists think we can do better
, thebetter way
refers to the21st-century upgrade
in Section #1, which indicates the great assistance of the latest technology, the main topic of the essay. -
Para #2 - In the next paragraph of the same section,
the first statement,
While researchers have long deployed advanced techniques to examine wildfire behavior, fewer have looked at questions specific to prescribed fires...
, explain how technologies help in the duration of the prescribed burn, but we should also focus on the problem of prescribed burn itself.
Cohesion
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Para #1 - In the first paragraph, the
carloads of gear
is a synonyms refers to the later mentioned items likeGoPro cameras
,drone-mounted sensors
,sonic anemometer
, etc, which shows the various tools used in the process of theprecious opportunity
. -
Para #2 - In the first sentence of the next paragraph
While researchers have long deployed advanced techniques to examine wildfire behavior, fewer have looked at questions specific to prescribed fires
, the author usedfewer
as a linker to change reader's the focus fromtechnologies
toquestions
of prescribed burn and emphasized on the following questions in the remain sentence.
[Sec. #3]
Coherence
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Para #1 - In the first paragraph Section #3,
the first sentence
Thinning pre-emptively could allow more wind...
gives an example for thequestions
in the previous section, including the pros and cons of prescribed burns that we need to consider and make trade-offs. - Para #2 - In the following paragraphs, the author quoted some citation and thought from some researchers.
Cohesion
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Para #1 - In the second sentence
But it might also help the burn consume more of the remaining fodder, creating a longer-lasting buffer against wildfire.
the author used a linkerbut
to represent the shortcoming ofthinning pre-emptively
. -
Para #7 -
The Forest Service has acknowledged that its methods are failing to keep up as the planet warms.
, themathematical model
paraphrse themethods
in the sentence in the paragraph #4 that the Forest Service and agencies has developed as a solution of previous preblem.
[Sec. #4]
Coherence
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Para #1 -
Better fire modeling is important, but so is baking that knowledge into easy-to-use tools for burn crews
, despite the great help of modeling method, it's also important for his team to apply theory to practice, and the next paragraph continues the topic. -
Para #2 - The paragraph describes their theory and how the team work,
Dr. Banerjee and his team of graduate students and postdoctoral researchers flew...
also inform readers the members in this crew.
Cohesion
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Para #1 - In the first sentence, the pronouns
he
refers to Dr.Banerjee in the next paragraph. Andbefore it was engulfed in flames
means the process of burn two day later. -
Para #4 - In the second sentence,
the author uses a pronoun
They
to refer toDr. Randerson and Audrey Odwuor, a Ph.D. candidate at Irvine
in the previous statement and create the logical connection.
[Sec. #5]
Coherence
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Para #2 -
The morning of the burn was sunny and hot. The researchers put on flame-resistant shirts and hard hats, and Dr. York, as the burn boss,
The members in the paragraph are similar with the aforementioned team, they were preparing to make a precious prescribed burn. -
Para #4 -
For a while, the flames had a meek, almost dainty quality ... as their machines gathered data.
the sentence shows the final scene of this essay and ends the article with an art-like picture.
Cohesion
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Para #3 -
the slope of the forest
is a synonyms foran area of high ground
in the last paragraph, further explain the vegetaion and the terrain of the high ground. -
Para #6 -
Dr. Randerson took a moment to admire the brutal raw power of the fire they were studying - a natural, yet also unnatural way of safeguarding the land.
the brutal raw power of the fire
is the summary word of the scene of the fire burns over the whole ground.
Take-Home Message
The passage describes the use of advanced technology and computer modeling to improve the safety and effectiveness of prescribed burns, a practice used to reduce the risk of wildfires by burning small trees, brush, and other materials that can fuel fires. The researchers are studying various aspects of prescribed burns, including the use of debris removal techniques and the impact of thinning on the intensity and control of the fires. The passage also discusses the challenges of conducting prescribed burns, including the cost, labor, and weather dependencies, as well as the risks of unexpected changes in wind and other factors. The passage also mentions the increasing frequency and intensity of wildfires due to climate change, and the need for new methods and tools to manage these fires. Finally, the passage mentions the development of a training system using a video game-like interface to teach land managers how to safely conduct prescribed burns in changing conditions.
Scientists are beginning to use cutting-edge technology and computer modeling to make controlled,
low-intensity burns safer, more effective and less disruptive to nearby communities.